Title

I ran my NaNoWriMo title through the Lulu Titlescorer, and it said my book only has a 22.9% chance of being a bestseller.

This only makes me less sure of my title.

I really love it, but it might be a little confusing. I wanted your input.

Check out the title and synopsis here, and tell me what you think. Does the title match the story? How do you think it relates?

I'd love your ideas. Then later I'll tell you what I had in mind titling it in case you can't figure it out.

Thanks so much!